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wei_jiangling ([info]wei_jiangling) wrote,
@ 2008-10-29 20:24:00

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Entry tags:fanfic, finished, jansen, lost odyssey, ming

[Lost Odyssey] Midnight After
Title: Midnight After
Fandom: Lost Odyssey
Pairing: Actually gen, but with Jansen/Ming in mind
Wordcount: 1590
Disclaimer: I do not own Lost Odyssey, its characters, nor the highly amusing scene that spawned this fanfic.
Summary: An extension of the scene in which Jansen convinces Ming that trying a alcoholic drink is a good idea, and Ming responds by doing so and passing out. Not my best writing, but I suspect writing from Ming's perspective is difficult anyway. I think it came out cute, regardless.

Ming awoke to an unfamiliar room, a soft bed, a Jansen sprawled unceremoniously on the nearby floor. Not to mention a terrible headache.

It took her a moment to recall the circumstances that had led to this situation; the last she remembered, she had been sitting at a table with Jansen, who offered that drinking the brew from the mug before her might help her relax and perhaps her memories would come back, and taking the advice, she... Ah. It was, possibly, unwise of her to have downed the entire contents of the mug at once. She did recall a sort of odd look on the man's face in the moment she had placed the empty vessel back on the table, though everything was fuzzy from there.

It did not take much effort to infer that Jansen, perhaps with the help of Seth or Kaim, had moved her to what had been intended as her room for the night. Considerate of them, to concern themselves such with her welfare. She was used to having maids and other such loyal servants--it was nice to think that these people, who were not so bound to care for her, would look out for her in such a situation. It occurred to her that she had assumed, where she should not have, that the former would be true. She would have to cease thinking quite so much like a queen if she were to survive this journey. Once she managed to get rid of this blasted headache.

So that covered the reasons that led to her awaking fully clothed in an unfamiliar bed. It did not, however, explain why Jansen seemed to be asleep (similarly fully clothed, she noted with some relief) on her floor. Surely the man had his own room? And that room would undoubtedly make a more suitable place for sleeping than a hard wooden floor, particularly when they would all have a long day ahead of them.

"Jansen?" she whispered, not feeling a particular motivation to move from where she now sat. The bed was comfortable, and frankly given her present state, she didn't trust herself not to immediately fall over were she to stand up. She did wish the man currently gracing the presence of her floor had warned her about such odd sensations to follow when he had suggested ingesting an alcoholic beverage. She knew, in retrospect, that he probably had not intended for her to drink said beverage quite so rapidly, but even so, this was most unpleasant. In any case, a quick glance at the window let her know that it wasn't morning yet, and it would probably be best to remove the visitor from her floor and get him back to wherever he was supposed to be. "Jansen," she poked verbally with a bit more force. This time it got a reaction.

"Hmmwhaa? Whoa!" Seeming to snap awake, Jansen skittered backward across the room until he ran into a wall. Which admittedly was not a terribly long distance in the room they happened to be in presently, but that only meant the impact made a louder 'thud.' Ming cringed, both out of sympathetic pain and the fact that loud noises were not welcome at the moment. "I... what? Where am I? Who... Ming?" Jansed blinked at her a couple of times, glanced around the room in obvious confusion followed by obvious embarrassment. "I, uh, I guess I fell asleep, huh?" It was Ming's turn, then, to blink in confusion, though she doubted he noticed the gesture given that his eyes were quite pointedly focused on anything in the room other than her.

"Indeed you did," she replied after a moment of bewildered silence. "My question is why you chose to do so on the floor of my room." If there was any hint of annoyance in her voice, it was more due to waking up into a confusing situation with a terrible headache, rather than the situation itself. She reminded herself that it would probably do her well to be a bit more wary, given that she had passed out drunk on following Jansen's advice and awoke to find him asleep in her room; on the other hand, she was also pretty certain that nothing had happened other than Jansen falling asleep on her floor for reasons yet to be explained. The man sitting across the room seemed to have sensed the brief mistrustful thought, because he suddenly had his hands up in defense.

"Er, no, it's not what you're thinking. I promise I didn't do anything, I mean, I'm not the type of person who..." he trailed off and attempted to regain composure by clearing his throat, his eyes wandering back toward the ceiling. "I mean... I just stuck around to make sure you were okay. You, uh, you were a little gung-ho with the ale there..." his voice trailed off into a quiet chuckle that was filled with embarrassment.

"Ah, yes, about that... next time I shall make sure to not drink the entire glass at once..."

"Probably a good idea, yeah." Having gotten his wits about him again, Jansen stood and moved a few steps closer to where Ming sat, peering at her intently. "Are you okay? I mean, you did black out. That's not exactly a good thing, you know." Ming shook her head in reply.

"You needn't worry so much. I seem to be fine aside from this headache." As if to emphasize the point, she rubbed her temple gently.

"Ah, yeah, I guess that makes sense." Without further explanation, a soft glow began manifesting between Jansen's hands, and he took a step closer.

"Hmm?" Ming inquired, not quite focused enough at the moment to recognize the spell.

"A trick I taught myself a long time ago," he explained. "For some reason the spell to cure poison also works wonders on a hangover. I never really thought that made much sense, but I guess it says something about alcohol, huh?" The same embarrassed chuckle from before reemerged as he released the spell, which, Ming noted, did do exactly what he had said. She offered him a small smile. "Better?" he asked hopefully, to which she nodded.

"Yes. I take it what happened to me earlier has happened to you, then?" Otherwise, she doubted he would have been motivated to try different spells to find the best remedy. Jansen laughed outright.

"Far too many times." He watched her silently for a moment and the laughter faded back to a concerned frown. "I, um, I'm sorry." Ming raised an eyebrow.

"For what?" As far as she could tell, he had attempted to help her call back her memories, and when that backfired he had gone to great lengths to make certain she was fine. How did that require an apology? Jansen, of course, seemed equally perplexed by her response.

"For getting you drunk? I should have realized how badly it would effect you, I mean, you've been alive a thousand years and never had any alcohol before? You couldn't have had much of a tolerance, and, well, I didn't expect you to chug the thing, but even so it was a bad idea..." Thankfully, Jansen was now close enough that Ming was able to silence him with a finger to his lips, which seemed to make his muttering cease more out of surprise than anything else.

"You thought it might help, and it was my poor decision to drink so much. You have nothing to worry about," she assured him with a smile. "And now you should probably get yourself to an actual bed for the rest of the night. I doubt the floor was terribly comfortable." Jansen opened his mouth as if to say something, but changed his mind and simply nodded.

"Yeah, that's probably a good idea." He turned to leave, but stopped at the door. "You gonna be able to get back to sleep?" He seemed at this point not so worried about her health as avoiding rudeness as he left. Ming nodded.

"I'll be fine," she replied, and having noticed another faint glow appearing in Jansen's hands added, "Besides, your sleep spells don't work on me, if you happen to recall." She smiled amusedly as the glow faded and Jansen emitted another nervous chuckle.

"Hah, right, how silly of me... I'll just be going now. Sleep well." And with that, he was out the door. Ming half expected him to reappear with something else to say a moment later, but the longer she stared at the door the more she convinced herself that he had actually gone to bed. She didn't realize that she was holding back a twinge of disappointment at that fact. She rather enjoyed his company.

With a slight sigh, she flopped back onto the bed and pulled the covers around her. Looking back on the evening, despite all vexations and oddities, she felt that she was appreciated and cared for and, ultimately, safe. Perhaps even moreso in some ways than in the comfort of her own palace.

"I think I shall sleep quite well, thank you," she murmured aloud to the air, and drifted back to sleep.



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[info]lassarina
2008-10-30 11:37 am UTC (link)
d'awwww! *squees* Lost Odyssey fic omg I think I might love you a little. or maybe a lot. Um. Ahem.

I really like how you captured Ming's voice in this, and Jansen's awkward flail. You did a great job of differentiating their modes of speech, and this is a totally adorable follow-up to that scene.

*rolls happily in LO fic*

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[info]wei_jiangling
2008-10-30 12:58 pm UTC (link)
GAAH, ANOTHER LOST ODYSSEY FAN! Thank you, I was starting to wonder if I was the fandom. Are you the one that posted the couple of kinkfest prompts for it? Because I have now claimed both of them. XD

I'm glad I did well with their modes of speech, since they (particularly Jansen) are somewhat difficult to express in writing. So much tied into subtle motions and tone of voice.

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[info]lassarina
2008-10-30 12:59 pm UTC (link)
I am not, in fact, the one that posted to KF. I know of one person on LJ - ovo_lexa - who has also played, but I don't think she does IJ.

My pairing of choice is Kaim/Sarah, because I am PREDICTABLE LIKE CRAZY, but Ming/Jansen is also cute :D

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[info]wei_jiangling
2008-10-30 01:12 pm UTC (link)
I honestly don't know which of those pairings makes me happier. Kaim/Sarah definitely makes the romantic in me very, very happy. Ming/Jansen is just freaking adorable though. I think I find Ming and Jansen sort of fascinating because their personalities have rather a yin-yang effect in a bunch of ways. So many things opposite, except... not actually. Jansen = schemey, Ming = straight-laced, Jansen = flirty, Ming = not so much, etc, but on the other hand, Jansen is more trustworthy than he first appears and Ming has her moments of guile, and Ming is the one to finally take the initative and kiss him and Jansen freaks out. XD;

I still love the scene from early on that went something like "I'm sorry for what I'm about to do *grab* Okay, don't move or the queen gets it!" "...Jansen, you're a thug." "There's a door in the back." "Huhwha?" XD That was the point where I really decided I liked Ming. But I ramble.

Kaim/Sarah is utterly adorable, but not as interesting to analyze.

I haven't decided what I think of non-canon pairings. There actually aren't too many to be played with, given that most of the characters are either in canon relationships or related. Fanfiction.net people seem fond of pairing Jansen with everybody, which makes me kind of sad.

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[info]lassarina
2008-10-30 01:38 pm UTC (link)
I've been too afraid to go near the Pit with regards to this fandom. It's a happy thing in my head. I don't want the Pit to pollute it. XD

Yeah, Kaim/Sarah doesn't have much to explore that way, but I am weak x1,000,000 vs. nerdy historians and devoted knights. XD

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[info]wei_jiangling
2008-10-30 03:47 pm UTC (link)
I did only because I was desperate to find other members of the fandom. It didn't work. =/

I will definitely write some Kaim/Sarah one of these days, too. Because, well, they make me happy.

Also, I forget that you aren't on my LJ flist and thus missed the Kaim-is-totally-my-role-model blurb. XD

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[info]lassarina
2008-10-30 03:51 pm UTC (link)
I will go add you there right now! XD

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[info]wei_jiangling
2008-10-30 03:55 pm UTC (link)
Haha. XD Good. Nobody else there understands my Lost Odyssey ramblings.

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[info]lassarina
2008-10-30 03:56 pm UTC (link)
I ♥ Lost Odyssey. Especially the Memory Lamp. BEST TOOL FOR A LAZY FICWRITER EVER.

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[info]wei_jiangling
2008-10-30 04:14 pm UTC (link)
Indeed. I need to actually make use of that thing.

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[info]lassarina
2008-10-30 04:15 pm UTC (link)
I actually watched the entire plot by Mem Lamp in like 3 stretches with the boy after I had beaten the game. My net impression is this:

1) Cooke and Mack annoy me. A lot. They were cool when that conceit was done in FF4. I DO NOT LIKE IT ANYMORE. plz go away, kthxbye. (it's just my thing. I feel the same about Rico and Rucha in Infinite Undiscovery. GTFO of my party!)

2) every game needs a memory lamp.

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[info]wei_jiangling
2008-10-30 04:20 pm UTC (link)
I haven't quite finished the game yet. Mopping up the side bits before we go take a poke at Grand Staff and presumably final battle stuff.

Cooke and Mack are okay, in my opinion. The general fact that Kaim and Sarah have grandkids is cute. I agree that they kind of get old, though.

And yes, every game does need a memory lamp. My FFXII fics would have been totally lost without a combination of that site that posted up all the movies and assorted people who felt the need to write down the entire game script and put it on gamefaqs. A memory lamp would have been so much easier.

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[info]lassarina
2008-10-30 04:24 pm UTC (link)
I am epically spoiled by FF fandom. I threw such a tantrum a couple years ago when I was trying to write for Magna Carta: Tears of Blood and couldn't find a script.

See, I got over the "kid party members" thing in the SNES FF games, so pretty much every time it has happened since then (Eiko in FF9, Cooke and Mack, Rucha and Rico, etc.) just makes me want to throw things.

But I've been told I have a very limited store of patience. :)

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[info]wei_jiangling
2008-10-30 04:38 pm UTC (link)
Heh. Yeah, kid party members are a sort of frustrating cliche. Eiko was one I particularly had issues with, but we won't get into that. Cooke and Mack are, as I said, okay. Not really any more or less than that. They are important for storyline purposes and they have a couple cute bits, but they end up lacking character development, which is irritating. When you meet them Mack is all spirits-yay! and Cooke is skeptical, and aside from Cooke becoming marginally less skeptical, nothing really changes much. And Mack still cries... more could have been done with that little resolution that seems so quickly forgotten. I don't mind if he still cries, but the continued "oh yeah" that he gets when he cries and then realizes he said he wouldn't. At some point, this thought should not take outside intervention...

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